XareohunterX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Xtreme Cliff Diving]

Nice work

a coin gave me 10000 points?? is that a bug?? my names alex

Kenney responds:

Nah that's not a bug, that's called memory cheating. Funny thing I banned you from submitting scores now, haha!

[Tangerine Panic XMAS]

not bad

This was quite a fun game and addictive i liked it a lot it was simple to make but a good game but the graphics could be better.

[Operation : Kill U.F.O.]

Work on it more

I got 500 points when you click some 1 fast they stay in the same place and dont move.

Pavlov responds:

^_^

[SAW Racer]

Very nice work 4/5

nice work on this project i know you have updated it from another game but u done a good job of it the graphics could be smoother and better tho i hope you get the best in ur class =);

[Simple Game Tutorial]

This tutorial is ok.

Well im a expert at making flash games and this tutorial wouldnt help me one bit it doesnt explain any of the actions and what they do most likely you got it from another site and but all the bits togeather. And some of the script has bits it doesnt need heres the shortend platform game script:

onClipEvent (enterFrame) {
moveSpeed = 10;
if (Key.isDown(Key.RIGHT)) {
this._x += moveSpeed;
}
else if (Key.isDown(Key.LEFT)) {
this._x -= moveSpeed;
}
if (Key.isDown(Key.SPACE) && !jumping) {
vel_y = 36;
jumping = true;
}
if (jumping == true) {
vel_y -= 2;
if (vel_y<=-15) {
vel_y = -15;
}
this._y -= vel_y;
}
if (_root.ground.hitTest(this._x, this._y+35, true)) {
vel_y = 0;
jumping = false;
}
this._y += 16;
if (_root.ground.hitTest(this._x, this._y+1, true)) {
this._y -= 16;
}
}

And the shooting one sucks as well each time you fire it cancels the first shot out learn some better coding.

This tutorial has only info for newbies to compy and past code to make a game that the cant understand and dont know what to edit.

kingcarlo responds:

Well hey, this tutorial doesnt say "For Experts only". I made this tutorial so that people could get some good actionscript for their games, and learn a little bit during this. Just because you are such a "master" of flash, doesnt mean you have to come in hear and give it a bad grade because it wont help you. I'm sure there are some people who need help with a game, and that would like to use this tutorial.